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Originally Posted by Ladybug  Really good chapter Laila, Love it.
I am outraged! Bringing Harry's family down? How could they!?!?! *huffs*
PAMS
Eviee <33 Thank you, Evie.  And yes, they're not big fans of Potters.  Quote:
Originally Posted by Droo Oh Wow! Not one, but TWO Chapters! Awesome! Thanks! A female werewolf is an interesting thought.  I don't think I've read about one before, that's why I shoved it in here. xD
Your image of Malfoys building a town is so contagious by the way, hahaha. Thank you for reading Kita. Quote:
Originally Posted by Hermione345 Nice and different, Laila!!!!
Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you. Quote:
Originally Posted by Looneybird Laila!  I'm so glad to see you. venture into writing. You are a natural, my dear!  This story officially has my stamp of approval and is definitely a better experience than 2007!  <--I really have to tell you the story in the Arabic Chat. Anyways, I really love the idea behind it with the conflict of Snape's story brought into light so you've got me hooked.  And it's an adventure story, which is absolutely my favorite genre so you're safe from what I said back in the Arabic chat!  Aww! Thank you Yasmin! I'm waiting for your story at the chat thread. Really glad you enjoyed them. Quote:
Originally Posted by Manal You know what I love most about your fanfic Laila ? it has alot of Snape on it , and I absolutely like the new scenes !
can't wait for more , PAMS XO Moony! Thanks for reading, dearo.
 These muggle nightclubs always gave her headaches, severe headaches, but there was something about them that released some of the energy inside of her. Nait was sitting at the table on the corner with Wyn drinking a big cup of beer. Next to her, he was rocking his body softly with the music blasting into their ears. It was dim-lit corner but Nait liked nothing more than dim light.
She was having her favorite, a hamburger - one of the oldest and original sandwiches in muggle world. It tasted fatty and sometimes Nait had a stomachache the next day because of it but doing something that caused her to suffer the consequences had its own glory.
"Did you see that?" Wyn shouted above the music, leaning closer to her.
She swallowed and looked where his eyes were looking, "No. What is it?" She replied loudly. The dancing floor covered most of the club and there was very little to see in this lightening anyway.
"There's a shadow looming over the others' heads." Wyn's voice was barely audible.
Nait rolled her eyes and bit into her sandwich, "We're in a nightclub, there are a lot of shadows."
He shot her a look, "No. I'm seriou-" He jumped up suddenly, grabbing his girlfriend's arm and dragging her away from the table. Nait struggled to stay on her feet from his sudden movement and shook herself free, "What's wrong with you today, Wyn?" She shouted, frowning.
His eyes were glued to a spot near their table, "Just let's get out of here.." Not waiting for her answer, the boy pushed her gently toward the exit door.
It was cold outside, she was grateful for the warming charms her house-elf used on her clothes. She wore a dark pair of leather pants, her strapless tight top and a dark leather jacket. The girl stomped her feet on the pavement as she walked out of the nightclub, her boyfriend wearing his hoodie looking from left to right frantically.
"Stop it, okay? You're frightening me." She folded her arms across her chest, scowling up at him. His dark hair looked like it was part of the night sky above, like nature. Nait loved Wyn basically for his tanned skin, dark hair and eyes - it represented the darkness that attracted her.
He wrapped a hand around her waist and turned her to face him, "I'm sorry, Nait, I didn't mean to." Leaning closer, his lips met hers gently subsiding the smirk he began to draw on his face.
One or two meters away from the exit door of the club, the couple leaned on the wall embracing and breathing the hot air of each other when something really frightening occured.
The boy, no older than eighteen years old, was zapped backward and slammed against the sidewalk. Nait let out a scream of horror seeing the looming dark figure floating on top of him. She fell to her knees, shouting and screaming. Nobody was around in this small street where shops were closed and the main street seemed so distant away. The girl's hands grabbed his legs and tried to drag him away from the figure that resembled dementors pretty much but didn't perform the kiss or held the same cruelty and miserable radiations they were known to. It just kept Wyn still and unconscious to the sidewalk. When Nait was trying to free her boyfriend, the dark figure moved on to her.
Nait froze in anticipation as it loomed over them both, it was supposed to be quite scary and suck out her soul. Instead, its cloaked arms moved in a circular motion instantly sending the girl pinned to the ground - she might not be able to distinguish spells but this was definitely a powerful non-human one. After one minute of struggling and fighting the pain, everything stopped. She was lying loosely on the sidewalk, panting and shivering. A warm, familiar face peered down at her - the big blue eyes glassy and lovely. Nait managed a small smile and sighed, "Oh, Eela, what do I do without you?"
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