03-07-2011, 12:51 AM
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Puffskein
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Hogwarts RPG Name: Abel Wysor Fifth Year Ministry RPG Name:
Derrick Vanderbilt Minister's Office | be the bre.
Wow, this is a great start. I love when the first couple chapters already have you predicting and guessing. Already waiting for the next chapter. Good job!
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